My Secret of Love

As the days go by

And you are not there

I feel like I might die

Because you are my air

 

But when you are here and the day is over

And it is time for us to say goodbye

My love for you is stronger

And that is no lie

 

You don't know that I love you

Let's keep it that way

Because if you knew

Then you might fade away

Reviews

[Keith]

I love the gentle sentiment of this piece.

The taste of fear you placed at the end is powerful twist. Well done :)

Thank you for sharing it.

[Crystal K]

thank you very much. I am glad you enjoyed it. And thank you for reading

[Sami Khalil]

A sweet poem.

[Acropolix]

The secret knowledge of love brings many wonders and problems. Nice write.

[Crystal K]

Thank you. And it really does

[quinfinn]

Crystal, this is wonderful girl! why didn't you tell me you could write like this? wow.

[Crystal K]

Thank you :) I really dont think that my poems are that good. I just write because it helps me out.