Time

Time, Why does it feel like I am always against you?

 

Time, Are you really ever on my side?

 

Time, I wait on you to see if things will work out

 

Time, You can be the joy I have with my family

 

Time, You can be sadness of tomorrow

 

Time, You are counting down my life

 

Time, You always make me feel rushed

 

Time, You seem like you speed up when I want to relax

 

Time, You are a drag in a akward situation

 

Time, Will you just give me a break?!?!?

Reviews

[quinfinn]

just reread this one.....i so love it. maybe i'll just add it ti my faves, where it belongs.

[Crystal K]

thank you so very much :)

[For Worse]

I like the first line. It's true, at least for me.

[Crystal K]

thank you. I think that the first line is true for alot of people

[Acropolix]

Time is a good teacher, but unfortunately kills all his pupils.

[Crystal K]

so very true! thanks for reading.

[saunved]

Okay...but could've loved a bit of philosophy in between the lines...!

[quinfinn]

it's her poem, you want philosophy? write some in between the lines like the rest of us.

[Crystal K]

Glad you are in my corner ♥

[quinfinn]

always

[rnuff]

truthful write, well said

[Crystal K]

Thank you very much!

[quinfinn]

very nicely written, Crystal. i love it!