Beauty Haiku

For Amanda.

You are what the blind

imagine when they are told

what beauty looks like.

Reviews

[Brad]

i used to loathe Haiku, both writing and reading them...i thought it brought on too many "rules" to really feel what the author was trying to convey...but you...you changed my mind around with this...this was awesome...i never knew how well a haiku could flow...bravo

[Rain Kissed Secret]

Short sweet and to the point. I like it a lot. You did a great job. Thank you for sharing it with me.
Rain

[Kazian]

Very very good, keep it up!

So beautiful and sweet.

[J. Alexis Balaguer]

Makes me want to be blind and imagine along with them--what a beauty she must be. Great haiku!

Alex

[C.J.G.]

wow; breathtaking. truly.

[Alicante lullaby]

wow...friend.your review was poetry.beautiful.

[GunMetal]

It is in haiku structure, even though it's not a traditional haiku. Sometimes poetry isn't about the words. It's who this was written for. That's the true beauty of this. Can you find poetry, in what clearly isn't poetry? Can you see beauty, when you clearly can't see? I like to think we can. When I read this to her, and the way her eyes lit up, the way her face brightened... That was poetry.

[WriterSki7]

Just the three?

Yes, it is a beautiful . . . comment. I'm sorry, but that's what it is: a comment. Not a poem not a story not prose but a comment. A long sentence. Nothing more. But tis is a very beautiful comment. Good work. (thank God there were no grammatical errors)

[<3 Simply Rebekah <3]

aw thats so sweet...I love it
nice image for the poem

[JENY]

Yes….
True…..
Gun….
Your poems are sometimes…
Like A.K.47….
Spitting intriguing paradoxes…..
Nice…