Heavy Metal Haiku

 

Heavy Metal stirs

The raspy protesting of

A thousand old folk

Author's Note

...it's true.

Reviews

[Shauna Jacqueline Ander..]

HAHAHA!! Yeah it totally is...
I feel that in this one the juxtaposition could be a little stronger [I know it's at least 4 yrs old, this is just future reference if you choose to use it] The first and last lines are perfect, but the middle line is directed to much to the last line rather than the first...
Again, just my opinion. Love this piece though. Great work.

[Elvina CZq]

Metalhead.. how nice :)

[chris' girlfriend]

lol i like it alot!!!
ROCK ON :P