Beautiful Anguish

Beautiful Anguish

A Poem by Gurglesnarch van Caasi

Resurrect my pain

And turn it into music

Find beauty in my hurt

For I have naught

Fill a wine glass with my

Shimmering tears and drink it

My anguish is so strong and I am not.

 

Beat me to a pulp

And I will still forgive you

Take and kill my soul

For I am done

I am much too weak to

Hold you or even fear it

My confusion holds and c***s the gun.

 

Pull on the trigger

And drive the bullet through me

Slam it through my brain

For I am lost

My thoughts are too twisted

To ever disentwine them

Life promised much, but lied about the cost.

© 2014 Gurglesnarch van Caasi


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Darkness has invaded your pen my friend. This one sank hard into my gut. Such pain and anguish carries through in each line.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Gurglesnarch van Caasi

8 Years Ago

thank you for the review! I'm glad the idea was crystal clear and the emotion was strong throughout,.. read more
"life promised much, but lied about the cost"

great line...the paradoxes and oxymorons here are delightfully disarming...no matter what you do, i am not strong enough not to love you.

you make me weak.

well done.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Gurglesnarch van Caasi

8 Years Ago

Thank you very much, sir. I appreciate the kind review and encouragement! So glad you liked it!
That's some stunning anguish you've painted here my friend.

Fill a wine glass with my
Shimmering tears and drink it

Love it, and that last stanza is killer! Going in my favorites toot sweet......

Posted 8 Years Ago


Gurglesnarch van Caasi

8 Years Ago

Thank you very much! I'm so happy you enjoyed it! :)
Frieda P

8 Years Ago

The pleasure was mine! :-)
My pasta joking friend, this was great. I loved it, I do agree with Sami in the way that it sounded quite like a song. It is different from your other writes, I like that! :)

Very much enjoyed....

Posted 8 Years Ago


Gurglesnarch van Caasi

8 Years Ago

Thank you buddy of noodles and eatery, I appreciate the review very much, and I'm glad you enjoyed i.. read more
This sounded like a song...Very different from your other works...Splendid...:)....................

Posted 8 Years Ago


Gurglesnarch van Caasi

8 Years Ago

Thank you so much! Glad you liked it!
Sami Khalil

8 Years Ago

I did...You are welcome...:)....................

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Gurglesnarch van Caasi

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Greetings. I am eighteen. I am a renaissance man: An artist and A bodyguard and A philosopher and A secret agent (I made that one up) But most importantly I am A writer. .. more..

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