Temporary Beauty

Temporary Beauty

A Poem by guy drori




Blooming almond trees;
Rare in heavenly beauty
so temporary.

© 2019 guy drori


My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Reviews

Ya exactly everything is temporary in this world...

Posted 3 Years Ago


guy drori

3 Years Ago

Yep I definitely agree
shruthi

3 Years Ago

okay thanks
This is beautiful in its simplicity.

Posted 4 Years Ago


guy drori

4 Years Ago

Thank you Jackie. . . appreciate the comment. Yes, what's beautiful bout Haikus is their simplicity.. read more
Perfect.
I remember in the movie, The Last Samurai, Katsumoto was fascinated with the cherry blossom...I loved this quote: The perfect blossom is a rare thing. You could spend your life looking for one, and it would not be a wasted life. And at the end of his life...he realized there is no one perfect blossom...they are all perfect. That is what your poem reminds me of. :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


guy drori

4 Years Ago

I am glad this poem reminded you of it . . . and I appreciate the review :)
Advertise Here
Want to advertise here? Get started for as little as $5
Very true. It's amazing how the simple things touch us so much. Great job!

Posted 4 Years Ago


guy drori

4 Years Ago

I agree Levi. Thanks for the review :)
This is beautiful and says a lot but I also wonder what you could do with a few more syllables. It stands wonderfully as it is though. It always amazes me how much can be said with just a few well chosen words.

Posted 4 Years Ago


guy drori

4 Years Ago

Thank you Pete . . . appreciate the review :)
One can do a lot with more syllables, yet as yo.. read more
Pete

4 Years Ago

I'm still learning. Thanks. Great write.
I really liked girl in black, and temporary beauty is a perfect concept for a haiku,

that being said, every syllable counts in a haiku and (in my opinion) "a plant that" adds no meaning.

I wonder what more you could add with three new syllables.

Posted 4 Years Ago


guy drori

4 Years Ago

Thank you for reading, and for your frank reply. you actually gave me something to think about there.. read more
beautiful haiku :)
keep it up!❣

Posted 4 Years Ago


guy drori

4 Years Ago

Thank You :)
Amy R

4 Years Ago

ur welcome !(:
Beautiful.. sometimes less words gives more meaning... nice..

Posted 5 Years Ago


guy drori

4 Years Ago

Thank you...and I agree
Randhir kaur

4 Years Ago

Mention not..

Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

533 Views
8 Reviews
Rating
Added on March 2, 2016
Last Updated on January 26, 2019

Author

guy drori
guy drori

About
What is life without art? I've been writing since I was 8 years old, and it is my main passion. I love inspiring other people & being inspired by others. Nothing is more satisfying than finishing a ma.. more..

Writing

Related Writing

People who liked this story also liked..


Morning Person Morning Person

A Poem by Alias


Her Her

A Poem by Giulia King