The Sky was Blue

Poem about the destruction of goodness.

The sky was blue
with clouds of puffy cotton

drinking water from the mountain
I have not forgotten

walking barefoot on the soil
strengthening my immunity

not too many vaccines
gardens shared in our community

I danced in the soft rain
my life was a string of pearls

It was a picture of perfection
I lived in God's world.

... and then one day
God was further away

Chemical trails filled the sky
the fake clouds hurt my eyes

the water no longer good
chemicals in our food

people forced to take bad vaccines
baby's born with mindless dreams

I don't dance in poison rain
my pearls fall from broken string

No longer perfect is this place
it belongs to evil, the human race.



((Vote Bernie Sanders in for President
Write him in if need be, vote for Trump if
you have too, but don't vote for Hilary.))

Reviews

[Ruby Heggie (PB Jacobs)]

Documentation
12/6/17
9:56 AM U.S. CST
My Review of "The Sky was Blue," by Gypsy Dreamer, a fellow Writer's Cafe Author
by PB Jacobs (www.writerscafe.org)

Happy AM!

Well, I gotta be honest, from my life experience education point of view, those who dwell too much on the peacemaker personality side of themselve's (extreme's, that is), usually end up getting left by the wayside, one way or the other. And then, they have to compensate for this with fea foe fumming something that usually doesn't work out, socially.

Sure, this could very well be something you have a thought on, so I wouldn't take what I wrote above THAT seriously.

Yeah, I'm having a flaky morning, as my flaky self is in full bloom, and yes, this side of me does tick people off, as opposites attract. True, there could be a lot less figure out how to you-know-what people over, but, there isn't.

Great thought, though. From what I see in your work, you are being you. Good enough, for me!

PB Jacobs

[Anne]

This is a powerful poem. It shows so much passion in your beliefs...even if I don't think the human race is evil (lol), you brought me to understand how deeply you feel.

[Gypsy Dreamer]

Sorry I'm just replying, I'm the worlds worst to reply. Thank you for the comment, and I feel even stronger today about my beliefs lol.

[Schatzi]

Hello Gypsy Dreamer,

Great poem! It was so real, gritty even.

Thank you for sharing!

Kind regards,

Schatzi

[Gypsy Dreamer]

Thank you sincerely! I feel deeply about the subject and even more so now.

[Dream Weaver]

Lovely poem my dear...Never Killary....Ever! ;)

[Gypsy Dreamer]

I'm so late in replying!!!! Thank you D.W. I appreciate your thoughts most of all. NEVER KILLARY! lol