She Takes Your Love

Song about long distant lovers

I know we belong together

obligations keep us apart.

No one wants to weather

storms of fractured hearts.

Peace be with you brother

as you seal away your love...

into a  f a r  a w a y  turtle dove...

she flies above...

she takes your love.

Sit still long distant lover

loneliness... it hides...

behind the smiles and laughter

way down deep inside.

Peace be with you brother

as you seal away your pride...

into a  f a r  a w a y  turtle dove...

she flies above...

she takes your love.

Peace be with you brother

as you seal away your love...

Peace with you brother 

as you seal away your love...

Peace with you brother

as you seal away your love...

into a  f a r  a w a y  turtle dove...

she flies above...

she takes your love.

She takes your love.

Reviews

[Ghost]

This sounds so much like a song for one who had their heart broken and then they are trying to find peace again.. Thank you for sharing

[Gypsy Dreamer]

Thank you, my heart, like many others, has suffered loss of loved ones and not to see or hold them in flesh is almost cruel... my only relief is my visions of them.

[lessa (kenzie)]

I loved the spacing in your fourth stanza, it sets out the feelings. Very well written, emotional read

[Gypsy Dreamer]

Thank you, I liked that stanza also.