Lost Gypsy Soul

Lost Gypsy Soul

A Poem by Gypsy Dreamer
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Gypsy soul lost

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A lost gypsy soul
the years took it's toll
am I too old
to find her...

hearing jewel beats
from rings on her feet
memories echo
her laughter...

Dancing all alone
not needing anyone
hallways of voices
come faster...

Scarves, skirts she knew
earring hoops so huge
dark raven hair flowing
about her...

Youth and innocence fading
gypsy soul forsaken
for wisdom over-taking
that girl...

© 2018 Gypsy Dreamer


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I like the mystery that comes with this poem. Not knowing this dancing majestic woman and not knowing our narrator too. Both seem to have endless amazing backstories that the reader just yearns for. This poem makes me thinks of Esmeralda of The Hunchback of Notre-Dame. Your choice of adjectives and nouns are quite perfect for her description. I like that there is a rhythm and nice flow on each of the lines into the next. I guess I just wish that there was just a bit more to the story. Overall this is a well craft piece. Thank you.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Gypsy Dreamer

5 Years Ago

Thank you for the nice review and critique. I do tend to stop abruptly at times. It's like, when I'm.. read more



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This poem made me think of every time I look in the mirror and go where did that girl go.. very good poem

Posted 2 Years Ago


Is she you - a younger or other version of you? And now older and wiser, lost some innocence, but lost some of that free gypsy spirit too? If so, I do not think she will be far away!

I was repressed and restrained when younger - much more free now to dance all alone

I love this poem, thank you. Would love to know more about what you meant when you wrote it

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like the mystery that comes with this poem. Not knowing this dancing majestic woman and not knowing our narrator too. Both seem to have endless amazing backstories that the reader just yearns for. This poem makes me thinks of Esmeralda of The Hunchback of Notre-Dame. Your choice of adjectives and nouns are quite perfect for her description. I like that there is a rhythm and nice flow on each of the lines into the next. I guess I just wish that there was just a bit more to the story. Overall this is a well craft piece. Thank you.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Gypsy Dreamer

5 Years Ago

Thank you for the nice review and critique. I do tend to stop abruptly at times. It's like, when I'm.. read more

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Added on July 22, 2018
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