Um... Love is for the brave?

Um... Love is for the brave?

A Poem by Satchmo's Gal
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Just came to me in gym class when I was...erm...looking at this girl I like. More of a song then poem, but you get the idea.

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Love is for the brave,
who love to play with fire.
though most end up in flames
very few slip under the wire.

Love is for the silver- screen
because all that you need,
Is a beautiful girl and a beautiful guy
and the sun setting in the sky.

Well, in the stories of life and love
the two didn't seem so different
and the passion that fuels it
couldn't be worth the time I spent
stitching up my broken heart
when you never glanced my way.
I'm a coward
and love is for the brave.

© 2008 Satchmo's Gal


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This was absolutely beautiful!!!
I like this part the best :
"Love is for the brave,
who love to play with fire.
though most end up in flames
very few slip under the wire."
I also liked this line:
"I'm a coward
and love is for the brave."
That line concluded the poem perfectly.
Wonderful write!!!! I love it!!!

-Elissa :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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you had the courage to write this down for all to see so that makes you brave. i like it.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Well penned poem, find you to be a well talented poetess as I truly enjoyed reading this write. Well done!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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I really really like the first part the most.
But all of it is very good! And very true!
Keep it up! :~)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

As I was sitting here reading it, I was trying in my head to come up with a tune for it. LOL. I like it.

Love is powerful and dangerous!!!! That poem was prophetic.
Good write!!!
Oh did you happen to get any exercise in????? LOL

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This was absolutely beautiful!!!
I like this part the best :
"Love is for the brave,
who love to play with fire.
though most end up in flames
very few slip under the wire."
I also liked this line:
"I'm a coward
and love is for the brave."
That line concluded the poem perfectly.
Wonderful write!!!! I love it!!!

-Elissa :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Love truely is for the brave.

This poem was beautifully written.

"Love is for the brave,
who love to play with fire.
though most end up in flames
very few slip under the wire."

I loved those lines it reminded me of a poem i wrote not too long ago.



D

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

WOW! this is truely beautifully written, Love is for the brave, hum!! You have a wonderful talent of telling a story.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You hit the nail on the head on this one. Love is a dangerous thing; investing your feelings and emotions in someone who might not even care...it's definitely not for the faint of heart. I'm sure most people can relate to this poem, simple yet deep. Love it!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Love is for the brave,
who love to play with fire.
though most end up in flames
very few slip under the wire.
you could not be more precise in saying this,its too painful to go through,winner or loser in the end ,still you are going have lots of heartaches and pains,so love is sure for the brave...

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

love is indeed for the brave as it takes courage to trust...an excellent write.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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