Getting Even Tougher

Getting Even Tougher

A Poem by Yina
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Sequal to "Tough Times"

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Times were tough weren't they? They still are. Or is it just me?

I wouldn't want anyone else to have to go through my life, that's for sure!

 

I thought things were maybe, just maybe getting better between Mom an Dad.

That's what I thought. I hoped. From the bottom of my heart.

An then this.

 

It happens every single time I get my hopes up.

I start hoping things are getting better only to have

everything crash down in my face!

I really really doubt I'll ever trust myself to

let someone get close enough to love me.

It hurts so much to have them crush that in your face.

 

Once to often is all it takes.

 

Dad, you left once to often

 

Mom, you asked that question once to often

 

Guys, you broke my hert once to often

 

 

Some day I hope to be a normal lovable person again...

 

 

 

 

           SOME DAY

© 2011 Yina


Author's Note

Yina
The poem says it all. An same thing goes for this writing as for "Tough Times"

Hoping your life is better

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A powerful piece. Keep up your writing. You express feelings very well.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Yina

10 Years Ago

Just an fyi, times are better:) Thanks though:)
Darllin' your goin' about it wrong! just don't be bitter, whatever you do.
But this is well written. :) Good choice of words.:)

Posted 12 Years Ago


this is so nice and hurtful ..
wish you good luck

Posted 12 Years Ago


You will be, You will be. I was hurt like that too and I came through! Just be strong, and take it from experiance, never hide your heart, and always leave room for love!

Posted 12 Years Ago


O.O wow... your poems make me wanna cry, darling. So sorry. I'm giving you a big mental hug right now. fyi. Last lines, (last... 6?) just complete it, so perfect. So touching. Love you!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Very relateable. Great write

Posted 12 Years Ago


your parents don't make you what you are, Fairy Friend. remember that. you don't have to be so affected... it can't be your fault.

Posted 12 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

great poem. . Beautifully written. . nice

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is really open and as other people say deep. It was a great job and i no what it feels like to have hope about a parent and have it crash. You wrote this out perfectly.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Damn, this is deep! I like it though its short but it makes me think a lot Times are still tough For awhile everything seems perfect& when you least expect it everything crashes down....
-SinnerInspired

Posted 12 Years Ago



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