Beautiful Liar

I like the lies because I need them right now.

 

 

 

Say it again

but not too loud.

 

Ooooh!

 

That's the spot!

Just like that.

I love your talk!

Don't stop now!

Lie to me some more!

 

Sway me with your words

Your jargon

Your speech…

your crazy lingo.

 

All said to a rhythm.

A tempo.

 

Lift me up with praise

I don't deserve

and never heard.

….but

I do deserve.

 

Because

 

I'm the shiny god

in your temple of

lust..

And yet

your favorite

disciple.

 

Too willing and

Trustful.

 

Give me more

of your precious word.

Your verb.

…yeah…

A metaphor for

Sex language.

 

Tell me good things that excite me

"X-cite me."

Tell me sweet things that entice me

"Entice me."

Tell me things that make me want

to give myself to you

because

I know you really love me.

 

Right?

 

I stay wrapped up in your tongue

of empty words

and choice phrases.

 

You grant me favors.

...Those

so deep it hurts favors.

 

So I believe the phrases you say

that you convey to me

just right.

They tickle the inner part of me.

Relax the cautious part of me.

Numb the thinking part of me.

 

Like a sweet poison 

from the viper you are.

 

I know what it is.

Heard many times before.

The same old image

casting a different shadow.

 

It was a good lie

and I enjoyed

the taste of it.

But for tonight.

please,,,,

Let me rain kisses on your face

and put the urges in their place.

I'm tired of being

,,,,,,domesticated.

Author's Note

I've seen the wrongs in a person I knew I shouldn't be with but they fed my ego and...well...nuf said.

Reviews

[Theta S. T.]

lol...there's nothing wrong with getting your ego stroked a lil bit...lol
sometime I really do feel like your in my head and you need to stop that...
it's not a safe place to be..lol
anyway this is really good everything flowed well you left nothing out and I swear I heard some music in the backround....nice write love

~~Theta

[Deaths Cold Kiss]

this is good, i can relate to this one

[Tenten]

this hurts me in that way of making me think of actions and words and fragmented pasts i'd rather forget with age. but its beautiful in the hurt, tintered anger, and darkness that flows through it. very beautiful.
"I'm tired of being....domesticated." the lines that resounds through me, it turns the piece into something wild and honest. an amazing work ham-kun.

[Kat Williams]

You grant me favors.

...Those

so deep it hurts favors.



Killer!!!

Not getting the end...let me read it again

[Ruby Moon]

hahaha...some parts got me confused and some parts
"...tickle the inner part of me.
Relax the cautious part of me.
Numb the thinking part of me."

lies lies lies...
lies lies and more lies
sometimes we dont know anymore...which are lies and which are "truths"

[Celtic Cat]

oh boy....I know that place. I think I have SUCKER written on my forhead that only the hunters of weak prey can see. Perhaps slicing off the skin would help...but instead, I'll give your piece another read.
What a great piece. The rereading was even more delightful than the first read. You know...you really do have a way with words....too bad you're not the only one, huh? I feel you, HAM....love this piece.