Again

Again

A Poem by HB Rita

I was waiting to be born again,
But I couldn’t see the forest for the tree!
I was in a darkest sphere with no lights
My heart was beaten to the ground where
I see the ground bursts due to lack of moisture
Nevertheless, I was just waiting to be born again.
And I see,
Some yellow jackets are busy spreading poison with penetrating holes
I shouted out! I could not escape!
Again, I fell in the dark and felt that;
darkness is our traditional destination
Therefore, Isn’t it better to be accepting darkness?
I realized! And I declared to be free
Then, I didn’t wait to be born AGAIN!

© 2019 HB Rita


Author's Note

HB Rita
A loser's depth ill condition

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maybe we find our own freedom not in the light but in the darkness...and maybe we accept what we should not...give up when we should fight on.
this poem gives us a really strong look at that dilemma...the feelings when we are in that darkest spot, and the decision as to whether or not to stay there safely...or come back out of the womb for a second time.
j.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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maybe we find our own freedom not in the light but in the darkness...and maybe we accept what we should not...give up when we should fight on.
this poem gives us a really strong look at that dilemma...the feelings when we are in that darkest spot, and the decision as to whether or not to stay there safely...or come back out of the womb for a second time.
j.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow...we are much alike you and I.

Keep it up HB!

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

HB Rita

4 Years Ago

ha ha ha! Might be. Thanks.
Ren Nightshade

4 Years Ago

No problem I enjoy it!
A good poem and a dark piece, you should wait to be born again, and keep on writing into the black drunk of night, all night.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

HB Rita

4 Years Ago

ha ha. ok I will wait to be born again Gram!! Thanks for your review.
Has the sound of either a bad dream or a revelation. The last lines seem to be a comment on the value of non-resistance.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

HB Rita

4 Years Ago

You got me right John. Thank you for reading it.

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HB Rita
HB Rita

Flushing , NY



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HB Rita, ancestors Bangladesh, live in NYC, achieved higher education at Touro College and University in New York. I am involved in New York City public school teaching for 14 years. I am also a well.. more..

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