A Little Nudge

Sometimes a person needs a little nudge.

Not yelling and screaming at which part ,we judge.

Just a slight little tap, to get them on their way.

Let them know that they can make it happen today.

Nothing to severe, not a beating black and blue.

Just enough to let them know the laziness is through.

So if a couch potatoe rests upon your shores,

throw them out softly ,have guts to take back whats yours.

Reviews

[Jon Roggie]

Nice. Sounds like my family.

[cwwood]

It sounds so helpful at first, like a mother bird nudging the baby out of the nest, but then the last line, its kind of harsh, though I suppose that mother bird was gonna toss that baby right out the tree eventually.

[Holly Mason]

well the momma bird has to keep it real and if done right can create a little nudge*)thank you so much for reading

[Jack...]

Hmmm, I'm not sure that would work on me, but maybe. You poems are always so real, so now and straight forward like a slap, I mean a gentle nudge. :)

[Yellow Butterfly]

Very inspiring

Nicely penned... :O)

[Holly Mason]

thank you much for taking time to read

[Yellow Butterfly]

Your welcome...