Tingles

he was there

so were you

the time

has come,

leaning in

shuttering breath

heart beating

palms a mess

lips touch

sensations travel

tingles the mind

when a first kiss

is so brisk

opens the eyes

tingling lips

surprise, surprise 

Reviews

[KaylasPoetryBook]

I'm always moved when a piece of writing has such power to it, yet is so simplistic in style. Absolutely love it

[Holly Mason]

Thank you much young lady*)

[therisa]

It's so hard to convey emotions into words, but you, my dear, do so magnificantly.

[Holly Mason]

thank you very much...mean that

[therisa]

Your welcome.

[rnuff]

deep emotions through out nicely protrayed

[Holly Mason]

thank you so much my friend

[Frieda P]

Who doesn't remember their first kiss? Sweet read, sounds like someone got the heart flutters with this one. Nice one Holly, made me think back.

[Holly Mason]

no new first kisses here but that damn feeling would be nice wouldn't it?first kisses tingle no matter the age time place they just tingle
thank you for reading hope you are feeling better skinny minnie

[Frieda P]

Yes, they should bottle it if at all possible Holly! Ha, skinny minnie my fat arse, it doesn't work that way...comes off the wrong places all the time, if you know what i mean? ;-)

...and my pleasure.

[Zap-the-awesome]

More like a flow of emotions than actual words. ( that means that you portrayed it wonderfully)

[Holly Mason]

well thank you much...sometimes I use many words sometimes bigger words sometimes barely any words I was trying to lead with emotion first kisses are always the best I think *)