Cascading Fire

crescent wings of starlit desire

harboring soul of cascading fire

grace with presence of empathy

sounding loud in a forever sea
kiss the sender of patience time

holding close in a loving entwine

certain air will grasp the soul

letting go of which it knows

cascading fire of crystals desire

keep coveted small hearts, liar

strong winds soul, smacking distaste

knowing nothing, stampeding in haste

sea hears only an entrance of care

blissfully knowing in what it is aware

wings like tendrils, rush forward in wind

releasing, rehashing the fires within

Reviews

[Ency Bearis]

An astute write of words of words beautifully presented, nice flow to read.

[Holly Mason]

thank you very very much

[Ency Bearis]

my pleasure, you're welcome

[Don Shaw]

kiss the sender of patience. i love that

[Holly Mason]

thank you so...that is my favorite thought that I have expressed in this..
thank you for reading much

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

The spark in the heart will never go out, we just need to keep fanning the flames with the things we are passionate about.

[Holly Mason]

cascading fire of passions delight
open the soul to everlasting life
crusading dividers will tear in few
but Rock and Roll cowboy knows what to do*)
thank you so fine sir

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

My pleasure :)

[DIVYA]

Great parallels of passion and desire drawn with fires and winds, and waves of seas. After all passion is the most beautiful element of nature. And reverberates in all creation. This poem stokes the fires within.

[Holly Mason]

stoking fires...in all creations
thank you so truly

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Holly this is your best of the best writes, very beautiful and flows smoothly in artistic sphere of poetry.

love this.

crescent wings of starlit desire
harboring soul of cascading fire

grace with presence of empathy

sounding loud in a forever sea

[Holly Mason]

thank you fine sir truly*)

[Rita L. Sev]

Poetry perfected! This is a gorgeous poem, Holly - form, flow, imagery, message - Excellent! While I love all of your poems, this one is my favorite so far!

[Holly Mason]

Thank you teach...sweet Sunday words*)

[Jack...]

Beautiful Holly, you words lifted me this morning. Thank you so much for always bringing such happiness to my days.

[Holly Mason]

and I respect your strength more then you know
thank you fine sir truly

[s y e]

Wow, Holly. This is amazing, such a great write! I love it! It is beautiful, well done, girl!

[Holly Mason]

thank you so young lady sweet words*)

[s y e]

Anytime, Holly! :)

[Frieda P]

Just exquisite this, Holly. Killer last line, I just love this one...it resonates in my heart and soul, lovely!

[Holly Mason]

thank you so fine lady truly

[Frieda P]

Most welcome, my pleasure, this is my favorite of yours to date...

[redflutterby]

Oh Holly this just stunning!! It reads aloud so beautifully and I love it! ;-)

[Holly Mason]

Those are truly sweet words...
thank you so fine lady