Nexus phase

Nexus phase

A Poem by Holly Mason

Nexus, will it be you or me
falsities fly with hate spun wings
next to us the wind is blowing
a connection will be made
will it be the me that knew the them
oh the falsities will not stop
determining factors, shine with no glory
the connection will be...
the nexus of you or me
stand alert, altered thinking
is all about...the connection

© 2013 Holly Mason


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Once connected to a person we wil always be connected because no matter how long or short that have an impact that has shaped our lives. Really good stuff Ms. Mason

Posted 7 Years Ago


Hi Holly. A very good heartfelt write about union... its ups and downs, cause and effect of relationships that can run the gambit. Good imagery. Flow is good; line to line transition and breaks are well done. Nice rhythm. Nice metaphor. Lovely depth of feeling. Good word choice; nice use of repetition for emphasis of feeling. Nice alliteration, assonance and consonance. Good closing lines. Well penned. Write on!

Posted 7 Years Ago


and when the connection is lost, we will have no roots to tie us together and we will blow our separate ways..

jacob

Posted 7 Years Ago


Holly Mason

7 Years Ago

yes we will...
thank you so fine sir...or should I call ya six line novel..that is a novel ide.. read more
jacob erin-cilberto

7 Years Ago

geez, i know....lately huh? me and my six liners...where the heck did they come from?

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Holly Mason
Holly Mason

Rockledge, FL



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I have recently learned that maybe I can write.I have recently learned that this is my last year.I have recently learned that I will write to the end.I am a whimsical writer a writer of whim.What ever.. more..

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A Poem by Holly Mason