AWHILE

AWHILE

A Poem by Holly Mason

a trace of you left on a road
a trace of me baring the heaviest load
conspiring theories rock the vein
gone for awhile but still quite sane
earthly being that casts the light
heading backwards looking left then right
making sense of the senseless seems
walking a road with only lost dreams
chasing them, run faster then life
over your shoulder toss all strife
loads will lighten dreams are in reach
but without these steps we could not teach
entities are empty until they feel pain
gone for awhile but still quite sane

© 2013 Holly Mason


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interesting write.it made me wonder,on entities, do they feel pain? our pain? would they be delighted or be sadden from our pain? like demons and angels..

"making sense of the senseless seems
walking a road with only lost dreams"
we always wonder, from simple things like why did he do that, to whats the meaning of life, many times we will just never know.
"but without these steps we could not teach"
nice lines :), all experiences in some ways are important

Posted 6 Years Ago


Holly Mason

6 Years Ago

thank you much ...love the entities bit...truly nice to see you*)
Myenigma

6 Years Ago

thank you, ive actually been on a lot, glad to see you too
Learning to live with the cards you've been dealt. Good to see you back Holly!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Holly Mason

6 Years Ago

good to see you fine sir and I thank ya
So nice to see you & read you again Holly, you've been missed. As usual, your poetry speaks simple truths so aptly....nicely pen'd! Stick around fine lady, will ya? ;-)

Posted 6 Years Ago


Frieda P

6 Years Ago

I know that one, glad to see you've taken to peeking in anyways....
Holly Mason

6 Years Ago

dang I didn't think you saw me peekin'.....well just call me Tom!! hahahahaxoxoxo
Frieda P

6 Years Ago

Ha that's your new name Tomolly. ;-)
Now this is a beautiful morning to see your smile on this site again. You have been missed my friend. Your poem speaks volumes and seems to walk the path with head held high. You go girl.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Holly Mason

6 Years Ago

thank you there Just Jack*)

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Holly Mason
Holly Mason

Rockledge, FL



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