Embers of Hue

Embers of Hue

A Poem by Holly Mason

upon an autumn leaf I write
by embers dawn of firelight
immerse your wishes in a wishful way
whispering whispers of words they say
empty your pockets of forever past
look to the skies, wishing so fast 
with embers cracking wishes will say 
I spare the soul , for only this day 
the summers moonbeam candlelight 
rupturing the whispers to dawns delight
paid with penalties of flightless wings
no wordless words for souls to sing
beauty falling, floating down 
a blissful, peaceful ,autumn crown
trembling, falling, slowly to light
forever suspended, vibrant and bright
the wishes of wishers
come in empty words , true
but the words of the wishers
in embers of hue 

© 2013 Holly Mason


Author's Note

Holly Mason
HAPPY FALL*)

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I find it appalling that over 600 can view this and currently only 8 left appreciation. This is a beautifully-written piece and an instant cafe classic in my library of faves.
But unless I missed it somewhere, please do explain "my last year"

Thanks for the 100/100 share

Posted 4 Years Ago


Holly Mason

3 Years Ago

Thank you...wish away , Holly
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me thinks you are not around but will review anyway, have to. Holly, this is brilliant. soft and strong with a very polished vibe to it. sincerely one of my very favorites including all those dead poets.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Holly Mason

4 Years Ago

I am still around :) thank you
this is great! what a splendid write!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Posted 4 Years Ago


this is a beautiful piece of poetry...nature's dressing...undone as beauty falls.

Posted 6 Years Ago


I like this verse the most: a blissful, peaceful ,autumn crown

Posted 6 Years Ago


Visions dance and glow and play
as echoes fill each passing day
as memories of every moment found
and the colors of every love surround.

Chris

Posted 6 Years Ago


Holly Mason

6 Years Ago

lovely till the end....Thank you fine friend
Chris

6 Years Ago

Thinking of you.
Hey Holly, I loved reading this. I hope you are well.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Holly Mason

6 Years Ago

Thank you there are sometimes I just like the way words sound together...like with whispering whispe.. read more
Instead of wishing on falling stars, I shall make my wishes on falling autumn leaves.... Why do we then wish on these dying burning evanescent things? But I love thinking about fall and it's death, opening the place to allow, require rebirth... Lovely poem Holly, the rhyme and the thought, a perfect way to welcome this most poignant season...

Posted 6 Years Ago


Holly Mason

6 Years Ago

thank you more then kindly...*)
Simply beautiful my long lost friend. Perhaps like autumn, you will grace us with your beauty again this season.

Posted 6 Years Ago



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Added on September 23, 2013
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Holly Mason
Holly Mason

Rockledge, FL



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I have recently learned that maybe I can write.I have recently learned that this is my last year.I have recently learned that I will write to the end.I am a whimsical writer a writer of whim.What ever.. more..

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