Paralyzed

Paralyzed

A Poem by Holly Mason

Aching to win
Fearing to lose
We start
Yet paralyzed
No movement
No wind
Only to finish
First
We start
Yet paralyzed
Not true
Not you
Not me
Even them
Paralyzed
But we started
Wind moves
With us
Fearing to lose.

© 2015 Holly Mason


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Anytime you face your fears you win no matter the outcome.
A very inspiring read.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Holly Mason

4 Years Ago

You are a great person lovely holiday pic
Thank you for reading ,Holly
the wind gets reckless at times...we are reckless when younger, but we grow older and learn to fear, to hesitate, to lose...

i think the fear of it makes it happen.

it is so good to read you again, Holly....really like this piece, very expressive in theme and style...like the short crisp lines.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Holly Mason

4 Years Ago

Thank you fine sir Holly
Paralyzed by the fear of losing. Nerves getting the better of us, but we start anyway. I like the repition in this, the poem itself feels as if it is moving. Really nice.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Holly Mason

4 Years Ago

Thank you for sharing,Holly

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Holly Mason
Holly Mason

Rockledge, FL



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I have recently learned that maybe I can write.I have recently learned that this is my last year.I have recently learned that I will write to the end.I am a whimsical writer a writer of whim.What ever.. more..

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A Poem by Holly Mason