All systems down

All systems down

A Poem by Holly Mason

All systems down
I repeat all systems down
Spiraling stairs falling
Catching the rail
Losing your grip
Reboot, rebuttal, revamp
Something is not you
Straining to be
All systems down
Inhale exhale
Petals fall
Something is not me
Breathing I hate
I want harm
To befall you
Fight, scratch the surface
All systems down
And this is doomsday

© 2016 Holly Mason


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Well well well... no sugar coating hear... it is not Godly but it is human nature to want to see those that hurt us get hurt in return.

Posted 4 Years Ago


this is such a battle within...like a split personality arguing with itself...

feeling everything falling apart and part of you wanting it to...

i like switching of "i" to "you" highlights the inner torment.

Posted 4 Years Ago



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Holly Mason
Holly Mason

Rockledge, FL



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I have recently learned that maybe I can write.I have recently learned that this is my last year.I have recently learned that I will write to the end.I am a whimsical writer a writer of whim.What ever.. more..

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A Poem by Holly Mason