So Simple

So Simple

A Poem by Half Dream
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The fear of life

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I fear the silence.

I am afraid of the dark.

I fear loneliness.

I am afraid of people.

I'm afraid to love.

I'm afraid of sadness.

I fear life.

© 2014 Half Dream


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And I imagine for good reason, that you fear these things... behind each a story in full.
I love the power of "I". It is... so simple. Nothing perhaps... more fundamental.
It is good to return to this, striped naked, and without dashing or pretense...
For me, I feel this poem as an invitation, one that encourages the voice of... "me too".
Except you have gone first, and risked the crossing of these waters, showing others, fearlessly, where the alligators are.
thank you-

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Half Dream

10 Years Ago

Most of my work based on real life experience this poem has no exception. Thanks for reading and com.. read more



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I love this poem! It's simply true!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Half Dream

10 Years Ago

Thanks for reading Aaron! :)
Ai Lun

10 Years Ago

You're welcome Maya :)
And I imagine for good reason, that you fear these things... behind each a story in full.
I love the power of "I". It is... so simple. Nothing perhaps... more fundamental.
It is good to return to this, striped naked, and without dashing or pretense...
For me, I feel this poem as an invitation, one that encourages the voice of... "me too".
Except you have gone first, and risked the crossing of these waters, showing others, fearlessly, where the alligators are.
thank you-

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Half Dream

10 Years Ago

Most of my work based on real life experience this poem has no exception. Thanks for reading and com.. read more
Never fear love.... know we are all in it together :)
I like your title, it says perfectly it ain't simple at all.... great contradiction there ;)
My lovely Sis, you're a brilliant poetess... of the shorter ones. I'm every time amazed,
how you wave truth with poetic brilliance so well...

My real sis you are! and I love you! x

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Half Dream

10 Years Ago

I see myself far away from being a poet but I can't thank you enough for your amazing thoughts about.. read more

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