Step

On my way I step on stones
Afraid to break into pieces
I fear losing patience
But I don't want to lose ..
If you're blind,
I'll be your sunshine.
Fate is cruel,
But who can really decide?
Life teaches you that the world is large,
The unique opportunities
And endless smiles is ahead of you.
Do not cry now,
Do not cry in this river,
There is still some way,
Take a deep breath
And calm your thirst,
You will soon reach the top,
Remember that if you fall lame,
My hand is not going away,
I'm with you.
Listen, do you hear?
Here comes the hurricane of fears,
Seek to attack your fear,
Close your eyes and scream on the inside,
Their voices scares only blind hopes,
Go, Lift, comb your ideas, it's time to go,
It's time to fight, let them think whatever they want,
Your hopes incorporates's time to live,
It's time to settle your eyes
Without shaking in the world.

Reviews

[Glen Yumang Manese]

I can see an inspirational touch to this verse...the way the lines draw the reader...which each one taking you further along the way in the lines...I was hindered only in one area that I would like to point out:

But who can really decides?
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But who can really decide?

I believe you do not need the "s" in there...but this is your work...may be you have something else you are trying to convey...just IMPO...

[Half Dream]

I just fixed it! Thanks for reading and for your assistance Glen, it means a lot.

[Cid]

Yup! That's a prettiest angel!
Be strong, beautiful ... "it's you that teaches devils that the world is large not the world, it's your who let them know how strong you are who left you alone amidst the dirt of the hell." An excellent job! This write's really very interesting one n the great message you poured into the words about world with the all of your Cuty-pie heart.

[Half Dream]

Thank you! :)