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A Poem by Half Dream




I promised my diary. 
I will only use black pen, 
When I would write nice. 
Slowly without rushing. 
As the sentences with the speed of light going through my mind 
I can not find my black pen. 
As much my brain loves to think about today. 
I can't write tonight. 
I get up from my chair, 
I'm throwing my words in the trash pack up my sentence. 
I say the same thing anyway. Nothing change. Everything is the same.

© 2014 Half Dream


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And just you did wrote Sister... you are stronger than you think :)

And also your beautiful words, are in black... ;)
I loved this one, for it is typical a thing we all go through now and then,
The blocks, the feeling of total emptiness, the void, the pain, the nothingness.

And there is always something to listen to, even when it seems all empty, just that
little space, you've conveyed so well here. It's the "Blank Page" of our hearts, at times.

Thank you for sharing your heart, and ink Sis.
For it became filled, just by now...

I always learn, and enjoy your writings.

- Elisa

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Half Dream

5 Years Ago

I cannot thank you enough for your wonderful words dearest sis. Thanks for all your support and love.. read more

5 Years Ago

*You write from the heart, which I admire.* I will come back for more dear Sis... thank YOU, for spr.. read more



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And just you did wrote Sister... you are stronger than you think :)

And also your beautiful words, are in black... ;)
I loved this one, for it is typical a thing we all go through now and then,
The blocks, the feeling of total emptiness, the void, the pain, the nothingness.

And there is always something to listen to, even when it seems all empty, just that
little space, you've conveyed so well here. It's the "Blank Page" of our hearts, at times.

Thank you for sharing your heart, and ink Sis.
For it became filled, just by now...

I always learn, and enjoy your writings.

- Elisa

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Half Dream

5 Years Ago

I cannot thank you enough for your wonderful words dearest sis. Thanks for all your support and love.. read more

5 Years Ago

*You write from the heart, which I admire.* I will come back for more dear Sis... thank YOU, for spr.. read more
"I'm throwing my words in the trash
pack up my sentence.
I say the same thing anyway."

This is a struggle that every artist faces - the struggle to find something different among the emotions, thoughts and words that swirl around in our minds every day. Sometimes, we're afraid to express ourselves because we're afraid of spinning in circles - of staying in the same place and creating the same things over again.

You've expressed the struggle beautifully in this poem. So much emotion and imagery expressed in so few words!

- Feather

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Half Dream

5 Years Ago

Yes exactly Feather! Thanks for your beautiful review as well. I'm glad that you can relate to my wo.. read more
Calissa Knox

5 Years Ago

You're very welcome!
this is somehow related to me...good

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Half Dream

5 Years Ago

Thanks for reading....
Bibhuti Bhusan Rath

5 Years Ago

you are welcome

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