When I become sad

When I become sad .. I close all the doors!

 

I will cut off any contacts to me!

 

I sleep a lot ..

 

I cry a lot ..

 

I drink water every minute!

 

My sorrow is great and I love it .. I do not want anyone to join me at the moment!

 

 

When I become sad I write

 

When I become Sad I arrange my room

 

 

When I become sad I get closer to my brothers only .. I laugh with them a lot!

 When I become Sad I start to dress in the visits!

When I become sad I see things logically

 

Whenever I am sad my voice becomes the most beautiful voice!

 

When I become sad I drink my coffee cold!

 

My sorrow is my freedom .. 

Author's Note

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Reviews

[MoriartyMesa]

With the opening flow, structure, and ending. It was something that felt like a music video. Perfect pause before the ending.

[Matt Anderson]

I think it's great, I can picture a girl crying alone after running around laughing with her brothers. Dark and heartfelt at the same time. Great read, thank you.

[persianleopard]

Love it!

[Kainan Corrales]

very good. i love the specificity of lines like "when I'm sad, I arrange my room.' Something many people can relate to. Good Job