Crazy

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It's got crazy (10-1-2015)

You've been right all along
yes I did do wrong
now I'm not where I belong

All you tried to do was get me to see
just to listen to you and let it be
you truly never wanted to leave me

It's a crime and I'm do'n the time
losing all that was mine
loosing you an even worse crime

I know it got crazy, but Baby,
is there a maybe, say maybe,
I'm working on my crazy

Thank you for giving me that call
taking the time to explain it all
I realize my backs against the wall

I'm going insane, insane,
in the night I hear you whisper my name
only to wake and yell
I'm living in my own hell
no answer to my prayer now

I know it got crazy , but Baby,
is there still a maybe, say maybe,
I'm working on my crazy

Craving the depth of loving and such
the pleasure and pain in your touch
I apologize, Baby, I miss it all so much
I miss you, I miss us, could we work on trust

We talked about everything it didn't matter
do you remember all the laughter
the drinks, the dinner and all that came after
I miss you, I miss us, can we find the lost trust

It got crazy Baby, but Baby,
is there a maybe, say maybe
I'm working on my crazy

Written by T. A. Maxwell

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Wow! Its got such a nice tone to it. I like the repeating stanza a lot! Great work ☺

[Phoen-ix]

I love this, I truly do. It is beyond relatable. Sometimes we have to take a step back and question ourselves on our actions..hoping that while we work on ourselves, our partner is noticing our efforts.