I Want To. . .

I Want To. . .

A Poem by Hannah

A lovers request.


I want to disappear

Feel your skin

And fall into ecstasy


I want to fall

Into white sheets

That smell like you


I want to sigh

From the pleasure

Of your soft touch


I want to caress

Your warm body

Until your eyes close


I want to dream

Of the love

That we both share


I want to sleep

In your arms

And never wake up

© 2010 Hannah

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lovely poem! I love that you have kept a 3 word line and some of your quotes are really deep. Good Job!

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Added on November 7, 2010
Last Updated on November 7, 2010
Tags: Lovers, Passion, Calm, Love




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