The Fall

The Fall

A Poem by Boldpen

When You fall from heights of success..


I have fallen, I've fallen down

Now stripped off my success crown,

through the winds of times

In dark well of failure deep

Shattered fame of mine now sleeps

With past of joyful chimes.


All the glory, all the love

Flew away on wings of dove

No one knows my name

Those who hugged, those who clapped

Were the ones, me who slapped

Who should now I blame?


All my friends in the town

Turn away their face in frown

In me they all believed

Held me when bright was side

Shoved me off in high tide

No one as my lead.


I stare with pain in gaze

As world shows its true face

None would hear me call

You stand all lone in strife

A lesson so true in life

Taught by this free fall

So, I will climb up back

Mend away the things I lack

And bear all the pain

With my soul forever be heated

As the rise would be repeated

Each time I fall again. 

© 2012 Boldpen

Author's Note

This is dedicated to a friend- who rose, fell, rose and is not afraid to fall now...
Thanks, where ever you are to teach me such a thing....
Apologies for grammar.

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Loved the creation... Keep rising & falling down is not bad at all. Its an opportunity to rise up again.

Posted 9 Years Ago

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Added on October 6, 2012
Last Updated on October 6, 2012
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Ajmer, Rajasthan, India

Hello, I'm just a modest girl with common interests. Just a normal 15 years old teenager.Writing is a way in which I can speak up for my opinion in this world. That's why It's my life. I love t.. more..

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