Dancing In The Rain

Dancing In The Rain

A Poem by Boldpen
"

I Love dancing in the rain of troubles...

"

Cloudburst showers like hard times

Rain drops shatter touching me,

Ringing with my laughter chimes

I’m where I need to be

The thrill is driving me insane

For I’m dancing in the rain

 

Let drops of trouble, drench my will

Strikes of struggle. drown me down

As I am waiting, standing still

on my feet in fallen town

feeling numb in joyful pain

for I’m dancing in the rain

 

Splashing hurdles with brave feet,

In doubtful puddles here I skip

With hard work, lonely chills I beat

Weakness drip off my fingertip

And steady forever I remain

For I’m dancing in the rain

 

Bracing hurts with smiling face,

Rising wet from every fall

Cutting out own way in grace

While roaring future calls

Unafraid steps in dark lane

For I am dancing in the rain

 

As clouds veil the skies bright

I will flourish, I shall strive

Come and go, tears and plight

In the storm, my heart survives,

Let it return back again

For I’m dancing in the rain

© 2012 Boldpen


Author's Note

Boldpen
I really enjoyed writing this, to feel that I can face the rain called life...
Thanks for reading...

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This is so lovely! I love the growing strength you describe - can almost feel it myself. Enjoyed this lots :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

"Let drops of trouble, drench my will
Strikes of struggle. drown me down"

An example of boldness inborn.
Embedded strength of words...

Beautiful..

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

wonderfully written, extremely inspirational, well done poet.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Truly motivating write... upbeat even when blue drops threaten to drown you in sorrow, hope allows you to get back up, survive, and continue dancing in the rain, well penned indeed :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

What a wondrous vision... strength found in the storms.. And was thrilled that you enjoyed the writing of this... that same excitement can be sensed by your readers... and the hope to keep moving on even in the rain.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Ajmer, Rajasthan, India



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