Oh God!!!!!!!!!

Oh God!!!!!!!!!

A Poem by Boldpen
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Daily, we pray to god for a thousand things. But are our wishes going a little bit of over head?

"

 "Oh God!" is very
popular these days
we use this phrase
in a thousand ways

Oh God! For bread I ask
Oh God! Give me a beauty mask.
Oh God! Please make me small
Oh God! Turn me smart and tall.

Oh God! I have a wish to tell,
bless me with a wishing well
Oh God! I am deeply hurt
turn that traitor into dirt

Oh God! I really want some rest,
in my place go, write my test
Oh God! haven't you heard
I want my name in golden words

Oh God! My house is very old.
Oh God! Give me a pot of gold.
Oh God! in this heavy strife,
give me safe and silent life,

"Oh God!" for this
"Oh God!" for that
but we are his art,
we forget.

Nothing will happen
by wishing alone
Nothing will happen
till we work on our own

But still God is, such a dear
All our desires, He keeps near.
But if we don't limit our crime
one day, will soon come a time

When God to us, will kindly plead,
"please, my child, take my seat,
and when wishes
will be thrown at you
we shall see,
what will you do."

© 2011 Boldpen


Author's Note

Boldpen
Not that God don't like to fulfill our wishes but we must not forget that He has given us a healthy life and many more essential gifts already. Hope you all like it.

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Haha! I like the ending!
When we're wishing, it is not possible to gain it without doing something...We should never rely on God always!
I really like this piece! I think every person should read this so they can be aware of their wishes...
There should be limitations...
God might not get tired but His job is just not that easy!
:)))

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Haha! I like the ending!
When we're wishing, it is not possible to gain it without doing something...We should never rely on God always!
I really like this piece! I think every person should read this so they can be aware of their wishes...
There should be limitations...
God might not get tired but His job is just not that easy!
:)))

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I loved it...so much truth in it:)
You write from heart and thats a big thing...keep it up!!
God helps us in difficult times anyhow :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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