Questioning Rain

Questioning Rain

A Poem by Boldpen

Rain is lovely, But What is it actually..


Twinkling down on one and all

Filling world with glitter new

Breathing life wherever you fall

Oh Dear, Rain! What are you?


Are you answer to the pleads

and prayers of a thirsty land?

Or a signal to the seeds

to stand and rise from the sand?

Are you tears of clouds’ tense

moments in the crowded sky?

Or the pearls of benevolence

from the holy heavens high?


Sparkling down the avenue

Oh dear, Rain! What are you?


Are you call for the rest

of refreshment in tiring time?

Or you come as a test

for structures of human’s regime?

Are you partner of sunlight

in painting the rainbow down?

you must be the jewels bright

fallen down from nature’s crown.


Flooding souls with joy anew

Oh dear, Rain! What are you?


Are you song of the sun

Penned down with the ink of sea ?

Is inspiration the reason one?

For sake of rhyme makers like me?

Or a part of earth’s orchestra

the secret beat that you play

or the rich king of spectra

magical treats that you display


Please! Tell me! I have no clue.

Oh dear, rain! What are you?

© 2012 Boldpen

Author's Note

Just a minor try for a little nature loving rhyme. I apologies for any grammar mistakes.... please notify me....
It was fun to write.. I guess... I's good enough to share.... Thank you.

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You have painted a beautiful picture in my mind. Outstanding piece or work.

Posted 8 Years Ago

nice, good write.

Posted 9 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

100% beautiful and simple outstanding very well done keep on writing n_n

Posted 9 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

That is beautiful and very interesting. You did a great job! :)

Posted 10 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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5 Reviews
Added on May 9, 2012
Last Updated on May 9, 2012
Tags: Rain, Nature



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