Mommy

Mommy

A Poem by Hidden Happiness
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A very little tribute to the woman who brought me to this world

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You hold my tiny hands in yours
And i'm not afraid any longer
Let them come- the ghosts, the monsters 
You're strength has made me stronger.

You're the brightest spark
That lightens my world when its dark
I know you'll always be there to protect me
And you never want to see anybody defeat me
You're the tender leaves that sheds me from the scorching sun
And if i look for flaws in you, i find none.

i know I'll never be able to pay you back
Forgive me for the talents i lack 
Forgive me for the times i have betrayed your trust
I'll always hold the water for your thirst
Three cheers for the woman who has her life to offer
Three cheers for my beloved mother
                                                                :)

© 2012 Hidden Happiness


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Hidden Happiness
So this is my first piece of writing for WritersCafe so please feel free to comment. i would really like to know what you think of this...:).

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What a beautiful tribute to your mother.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Hidden Happiness

8 Years Ago

thank you:-).
Very beautiful and touching, perfect for the occasion you wrote it for

Posted 8 Years Ago


This is so sweet, Today is mothers day, you should show it to your mom. :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


This is such a sweet piece! I LOVE it!!!

~*Anastasia Shalroy~*

Posted 9 Years Ago


Awwwwww, I love it!!! Makes me look forward all the more to being a mom, if I ever make it that far. I think this is my favorite part:

"You're the brightest spark
That lightens my world when its dark"

Very touching and sweet xD

Posted 9 Years Ago


I wish I could have felt like this growing up. This is beautiful, and very special with meaning. I am sure that your mom would love this, cause I know I sure did.

Posted 9 Years Ago


very heartfelt, sweet, and inspiring. Great job! :-)

Posted 9 Years Ago



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