Mommy

A very little tribute to the woman who brought me to this world

You hold my tiny hands in yours

And i'm not afraid any longer

Let them come- the ghosts, the monsters 

You're strength has made me stronger.

You're the brightest spark

That lightens my world when its dark

I know you'll always be there to protect me

And you never want to see anybody defeat me

You're the tender leaves that sheds me from the scorching sun

And if i look for flaws in you, i find none.

i know I'll never be able to pay you back

Forgive me for the talents i lack 

Forgive me for the times i have betrayed your trust

I'll always hold the water for your thirst

Three cheers for the woman who has her life to offer

Three cheers for my beloved mother

                                                                :)

Author's Note

So this is my first piece of writing for WritersCafe so please feel free to comment. i would really like to know what you think of this...:).

Reviews

[Brian B McNally]

What a beautiful tribute to your mother.

[Hidden Happiness]

thank you:-).

[RachelReaper]

Very beautiful and touching, perfect for the occasion you wrote it for

[twylight999777]

This is so sweet, Today is mothers day, you should show it to your mom. :)

[Jasmine Thousand]

This is such a sweet piece! I LOVE it!!!

~*Anastasia Shalroy~*

[ღ.яαg..]

Awwwwww, I love it!!! Makes me look forward all the more to being a mom, if I ever make it that far. I think this is my favorite part:

"You're the brightest spark
That lightens my world when its dark"

Very touching and sweet xD

[Crystal Marie Dreier]

I wish I could have felt like this growing up. This is beautiful, and very special with meaning. I am sure that your mom would love this, cause I know I sure did.

[DeeLoves2Write]

very heartfelt, sweet, and inspiring. Great job! :-)