You're My Peace

You're My Peace

A Poem by Hidden Happiness
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The Feeling Of Being Safe In This Hell We Live In.

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I'm laughing on the outside
When I'm crying on the inside
Tears of pain 
I pretend are of pleasure
The little bits of happiness
I try my best to treasure
Deep inside my heart.

When I scream, it comes out as a laugh,
When I was a child, did i know life would be so tough
Now in a world of dreams, I like to dwell
Your love is my only fuel
And I only feel safe there.

In this world, I can't feel my heart beat
The ground is shaking beneath my feet
Only you can help me get rid of my tears
Put a smile on my face, wipe out my tears
Without you, in this desert, I so cannot thrive
Whether you like it or not,
I will cling to you for the rest of my life.
                                                                             :)

© 2012 Hidden Happiness


Author's Note

Hidden Happiness
Just a little something i wrote when i was feeling suffocated. please comment as you like:).
the line-only you can help me get rid of my tears would be 'only you can help me get rid of my fears' it was a typing mistake and many many thanks to Sophie for correcting me.

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Your poem neatly expresses the feelings of anguish we sometimes feel, along with the need to lean on someone for support. A good friend can wipe the tears from our face and help us go on. It's a good piece.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Hidden Happiness

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much:-).
What I enjoy here is the inner tension of the message, the contradictions that emotions often create ( the first line of the second verse ) and the way the last lines offer a reconcilliation - good work.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Hidden Happiness

6 Years Ago

thanks so much:-).
Even though love is a common theme in writing, this poem kinda explains it in a sad, realistic way. The third stanza is my favorite, and the ending is rather sweet. Good job.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Hidden Happiness

6 Years Ago

thank you:-).
Tomislav Petricevic

6 Years Ago

You're welcome. :)
Hidden Happiness

6 Years Ago

:-)
I really love this poem, for the sadness that it's about, it's very well written.

Posted 7 Years Ago


The last two lines were definitely my favorite :) This is a great peice, i feel like this some of the time, so i feel as if i can relate, so it makes it even better, Great Write, Great Job!! I love it!

Posted 7 Years Ago


I loved this piece a lot! I feel like this all the time and I hate it.

Posted 7 Years Ago


"Whether you like it or not,
I will cling to you for the rest of my life." That line was my favorite...it completed the rest of the pain and the poem...keep writning


Posted 7 Years Ago


the kind of poetry that just turns everything upside down and inside out. i loved this! fantastic.

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Yes.. we all need to feel safe and like that feeling...very well penned
Enjoyed this..well written...I agree...kind of has lyrical feel

Posted 7 Years Ago


Do you play any instruments? You have a natural beat in your poem...I'd try putting it to a melody :)

Posted 7 Years Ago



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