Fear Fall

Fear Fall

A Poem by HardCoreReFusion

Don't fear the blood or the smoke.
They are merely the result of mistrust.
The real fear lies in being consumed.
Once devoured, a quicksand hand couldn't
pull you out.
Light lies when it hides in the daylight
Because only in tangible misery is it limited
to cutting through the dark.
What will it take to open your eyes?
No of course not you, everyone's eyes read perfection
in the mirrors.
But one day mirrors won't exist, only expectations.
Will you have met them? Or will you enjoy failing into furnace?
To maintain is hard but to let go is harder.
Look into yourself, don't scream for anything unless it matters.
Honesty cannot be overlooked, it will not be overlooked.
So do not fear the blood or the smoke.

© 2010 HardCoreReFusion

Author's Note

This is meant to be a song, screamed.

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Powerful dark imagery and speaks of fear and pain... Could sense the stunning sound!

Posted 12 Years Ago

Nice, Thanks For Sharing

Posted 12 Years Ago

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Posted 12 Years Ago

Nice for a song :) very good write really dark and horrid GREAT ! :)

Posted 12 Years Ago

Really interesting. I don't like screaming music... it irritates me but this is something that would sound very interesting because I actually like the lyrics of this one. The imagery is wonderful. I especially loved "failing into the furnace?" Very well done.

Posted 12 Years Ago

wow, it feels like a heavey metal song as well, dark, dripping with a sense of morbidity and power, great job, i really liked it

Posted 12 Years Ago

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Added on May 19, 2010
Last Updated on May 22, 2010
Tags: Scream, Metal, Religion, Dark, Optimistic



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