Those Moments

Those Moments

A Poem by HarmlessLove

My head on your shoulder

Heartbeats thrumming in my ear

Listening to the same headphones

A soft piano solo we both love

The harsh sting of reality calls us

We wake up

And leave the warmth

That we had become accustomed to

Now miles apart,

In different homes

Alone

I fall asleep listening

To the piano solo with both love.

© 2012 HarmlessLove


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I like this poem. Just a few things:
You only have punctuation in two places so I think it would flow better if you'd just cut those out.
"To the piano solo with both love," is it suppose to be we both love? If not I'm sorry for assuming so.
Really excellent poem and enjoyable read :)

Posted 11 Years Ago



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Added on June 27, 2012
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Tags: Poem, night, piano, shoulder, soft, classical, warm, teenagelove, teenagers, falling, in, love, alone, fallinginlove, music

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HarmlessLove
HarmlessLove

Richmond, VA



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