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Loud Thoughts

Loud Thoughts

A Poem by Harmony.Txx
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Melancholic, Bipolar, Mental illness, self identity.

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Tonight I’m empty 

and over flowing 

with tears. 


I can’t move 

anymore, 

depression 

and mania 

are my friends 

I hold near 

and dear. 


Who do I ask 

for help? 

Deaf ears, to all… 

Beautifully trying 

to breathe 

after death.  

I learned death is

love after all. 


I bowed at her fear, 

but did it exist? 

Poisonous delusions 

Try to drive me 

to slit wrist 


There is no hope for me 

I’m sure to get mad 

at nothing.

My imagination plays 

the insecurity 

of worldly 

mental judgement. 


The flowers of life 

don’t look so 

beautiful now  

we all connect 

as one 

including the dark side

from way down.... 


-Brianna Rodriguez

© 2022 Harmony.Txx


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The poem made me feel sad and alone. It makes sense that the thoughts are loud. Love the title and the description grip me as the reader.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Captures the battles of bipolar very well; allows the reader deep understanding

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It is hard to appreciate the flowers of life beneath the crushing weight of depression, and mania might cause you to run up all your credit cards to the max. Bipolar is one grim disease.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on March 19, 2022
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Harmony.Txx
Harmony.Txx

Las Cruces, NM



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