Loving you I

Loving you I

A Poem by Quattro Hall

Loving you I feel no pain. 
Loving you I have no want no yarn. 
Loving you I still see the world. 
Loving you I can feel a kiss and the love the warmth it brings. 
Loving you I care more for the path ahead then pain that is behind us. 
Loving you I still have want but its for more time with you. 
Loving you I can’t care for the mistakes we make. 
Loving you I can be no happier with where I am. 
Loving you I can have a loving arm and caring hand. 
Loving you I can’t find worrier. 
Loving you I find me self in a hate. 
Loving you I feel there’s nothing after we wake up. 
Loving you is a dream one that is to good to be true. 
Loving you I find a real person inside me. 
Loving you I want you and only you. 
Loving you I care for you and only you. 
Loving you I can’t cry if you are not there. 
Loving you I can’t feel the world when I wake. 
Loving you I can’t find myself with out you. 
Loving you I need more of you. 
Loving you I’m lost in a dream, lost in my mind. 
Loving you I see others in happiness and I feel envy. 
Loving you I can’t have you. 
Loving you is a pain I can’t bare no more. 
Loving you I say my last words. 
Loving you i… 

© 2013 Quattro Hall


Author's Note

Quattro Hall
Man This one is dark inside a box made of light.

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Beautiful write. Such bitter sweet pain, laced with sorrow. I felt passion in your words. Thank you :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


there is a candle flame behind the words
this is very well put and quite lovely even though in the end you feel alone
thank you for sharing

Posted 7 Years Ago


Quattro Hall

7 Years Ago

thank you very much
A sweet valentine's poem.

Posted 7 Years Ago


A great job, very easy to read and leaves one thinking, well done, good read.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Great job! There's really nothing I can say, you've said it all. Thanks for sharing this with me.

Posted 7 Years Ago


the way you ended it... meant there are still a lot more to say... which really brings about the true meaning of love... that It could bring you far more than you could ever imagine. Great write!

Posted 7 Years Ago


I love your comment, yes, exactly!!

Posted 7 Years Ago



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