Me and You

Me and You

A Poem by Havatara

The milky way is full of gleaming lights

that twinkle in the sky so high above,

but none of these are like your eyes, so bright!

that smile down at me with our true love.

Life seems so empty when I think of it,

to never see your face in light of day.

We really, truly are a perfect fit.

I wish you’d never ever go away.

So think of all the things we’d make and do.

We’d catch a star and keep it in our hands.

We’d have a garden, built for me and you.

We’d go down roads to oh so distant lands.

I’d spend the rest of life with only thee,

so will you please, oh please! just marry me?

© 2011 Havatara

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Nice poem. Your emotion is portrayed without being all gooey. I liked it.

Posted 8 Years Ago

a very sweet poem. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 8 Years Ago

I tend to write and read free verse as I find that in some poetry the rhyme can be forced, However I enjoyed this good feel poem - it flowed nicely , good rhythm and rhyme.:)

Posted 8 Years Ago

Aww, that's cuuuute! The first stanza especially. The rhyming was supurb. A lovely poem. :) Top work.

Posted 9 Years Ago

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Added on March 29, 2011
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