Brother

Having a brother is a boon in everybody's life.

Brother

Dear Brother,

You taught me to be strong

Defended me when I was wrong

For every mistake, you gave me lessons

 And always inspired me to pursue my ambitions

 

When as mountains seemed my trouble

You’d help them perish and treat them like a bubble

You always told me life is harsh

And taught me never to lose my heart

 

You treat me as a Princess

And train me like a warrior

I find you when I have nobody by my side

You’ve held my hand throughout my stormy nights

 

Dear brother, I love you so much

No amount of “Thank You” could ever seem enough

For what you mean to me can only be felt

I will love you till the end.

 

Reviews

[Neville]

If you genuinely mean what you have written here, both you and your brother are truly blessed. This is more an adoration poem than a love poem methinks, N

[Madhu]

Yep, I genuinely mean it! And I consider myself lucky to have him :) Thank you for the review!

[Shubham Joshi]

This is simple and beautiful and yet you express all your gratitude to a brother in an excellent way.

[Madhu]

Thank you :)

[Devanshu Rajput]

A wonderful tribute to your brother. It is written in a very simple and fluid language.

I liked th simile used by you here:-

"You’d help them perish and treat them like a bubble"

Really brother or a sister plays a role of paramount importance in one's life.

WOnderful poem! Bravo!

Keep writing
Devanshu

[Madhu]

Thank you for the kind review! :)

[closed]

sincere sentiments
expressed through a poem that personifies adoration for a sibling


great job



-Dream

[Madhu]

Thank you for the review :)

[FarisGreybear]

absolutely beautiful. after reading it the first time, I had to read it while listening to a track by Beck, named Brother, of course. perfect pairing. imho

[Madhu]

Oh that's a great suggestion, I'll listen to that track for sure. :) And thank you for your kind words!

[Robert Strzalko]

Your feelings for your brother are clearly expressed. It's a great thing that you feel so inspired by him.

[Madhu]

Thank you for the review Robert :)

[Pushkar Prabhat]

WoW!!!
so sweet and much passionate......
reminds me of my brother.....
very well written.....
i loved it!!!!
:)

[Madhu]

Thank you for your kind words. :)

[Pushkar Prabhat]

you are welcome...............!!!! :) :)

[Samhitha Mopati]

"You treat me as a Princess
And train me like a warrior"
So true these lines are!
"Brothers and sisters are as close as hands and feet."
Your poem is extraordinarily simple; yet outstandingly emotional ! :)
I have a brother and we only fight! : You made me realize that there is indeed love hidden in those
kicks and slaps! :P























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[Madhu]

Thank You Samhitha, yeah it's amazing to have a brother :) Thank you for your kind review. :)

[Alfred Kukitz]

Dear Madhu,

You wandered into a lovely relationship with your brother and poetry. Sweetly said!

Regards,
Al

[Madhu]

Thank you for your review Alfred :)

[Gee]

A very sweet poem Madhu,nicely written.Lovely poetry

[Madhu]

Thank you so much :)

[Gee]

You are most welcome