that girl

that girl

A Poem by Heartswell.
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Just a small nonsensical poem-like thing written on a whim.

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That girl smiled a  wicked smile talking to me, "if i told you i saw god at the back of my head would you laugh at me?" she smiles her wicked smile.
i say no.
then she smiles again and kisses her painting of a dragon making love to a woman whose shoulder is half-eaten and whose bones are red with her blood and her hair.
and i ask about that painting.
again she smiles a smile dipped in orange paint tipped with black
"it may be my own sense of beauty
or it may be that i'm bad with a brush."
then she takes off her blouse and 
leaps out of the window

© 2010 Heartswell.


Author's Note

Heartswell.
Capitalization is absent under creative license.

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Very very interesting.
It's very good though, in a different sort of way.
I love the edge of this.
And thank you for adding that capitalization is absent under creative license(:
I admire that.
So few do it that it's almost like a signature style whenever they do.
Good work new writer(:
Keep it up

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Ha, i love it. The last line was great. Unexpected. But funny coz it was so unexpected and you know what i love the eccentricity behind this and also the image of the dragon making love to the woman and the blood etc its so unique on its own. well done. must keep this!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Very good :) I cant write poems to save my life so i envy u! lol jk but very nice :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


Thank you so much for the concrit, love. ^_^

Posted 13 Years Ago


Very very interesting.
It's very good though, in a different sort of way.
I love the edge of this.
And thank you for adding that capitalization is absent under creative license(:
I admire that.
So few do it that it's almost like a signature style whenever they do.
Good work new writer(:
Keep it up

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Heartswell.
Heartswell.

Middle East, Kuwait



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