Spring Gently

Spring Gently

A Poem by Heavenly Scent
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Haiku for Melissa :)

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                 Spring gently enters,

    Flowers peeping through the soil,

                              Soft rain helps them grow.

© 2008 Heavenly Scent


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Very nice Haiku indeed! I too like the greens - to me it shows different states of life springing up from the earth as well as the many shades of color. Best of luck in the contest!

~nicely done~

Posted 12 Years Ago


I enjoyed this showering of words in this Haiku! The color green represents Spring well. Loved it. The contest ends the 15th of June. I will be in touch. Thank you for entering the contest!!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is was well done, I like it.
its a nice visual piece.
thee only thing missing
was the heyfever that comes
with spring.

The Poor mans' Poet

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Heavenly Scent
Heavenly Scent

Eastbourne, United Kingdom



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