Feeling Grey!

Feeling Grey!

A Poem by Heavenly Scent

what a miserable day today :(


What day is it?

I can't remember!

What time?


Am I awake?




Good lord, I'm cold!

It's wet, it's dark.

Outside it's stark!

Grey and uninviting,

Think I'll go back to bed!


Grey Morning!

© 2008 Heavenly Scent

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Yeah, I seriously can relate to every words you've just described. I, myself, am not a morning person, either. When you've said those lines; "I'm cold! It's wet, it's dark. Outside it's stark! Grey and uninviting" It reminded me of that camping trip I took when it was raining overnight and my "waterproof" tent was soaked with leftover of the rain... "waterproof" my a*s...

Anyway, it's pretty good tho and good morning to you, too...

Posted 12 Years Ago

You've captured a very common feeling in a very uncommon ( unique) way. thank you for sharing and welcome to the wc.org

Posted 12 Years Ago

I quite know how you feel, it's been like that in NY for days now! I especially like the urgency in the second verse: Good lord! I'm cold, it's wet, it's dark. Outside it's stark. Grey and uninviting. Think I'll go back to bed!

I think I shall too! Nice job, I enjoyed the lightheartedness in this piece, even if it's a bit gray. LOL
BTW: It's exactly THAT here this morning!

Posted 12 Years Ago

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Added on May 16, 2008
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Heavenly Scent
Heavenly Scent

Eastbourne, United Kingdom

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