Timepiece ~ Cinquain

Timepiece ~ Cinquain

A Poem by Helena

 

 

Clock

Counting minutes

Ticking life away

Waiting for no man

Timepiece

© 2013 Helena


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it doesn't wait, and we can't keep trying to catch up to it.

we need to absorb each minute in the best way we can.

tick tick tick.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Uau! Lovely!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Congratulations,Helena!!!
My morning has been graced by your winning piece.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Helena

11 Years Ago

So kind of you to read this and leave your kind heart prints behind.

Helena :)
zainul

11 Years Ago

Thank you Helena for the lovely words.
I regret for not reviewing the amazing gems created by .. read more
An economy of words that delivers actuality. I admire the brevity of this write. Very well thought out.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Helena

11 Years Ago

Thank you for reading and reviewing. I appreciate it!

Helena :)
Androglossia

11 Years Ago

You're very welcome, Helena.
Lovely verse...

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Helena

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much Marie.
Love it :) Especially the fourth line :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Helena

11 Years Ago

Thank you Norma! I actually won a little prize for this in a literary magazine, much to my surprise.. read more

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6 Reviews
Shelved in 2 Libraries
Added on January 27, 2013
Last Updated on January 27, 2013
Tags: clock, time, ticking, life

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Helena
Helena

Banora Point, N.S.W., Australia



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