Without You

Without You

A Poem by Helena
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Romance

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My heart will go on beating
When sweet blossoms bloom 
Butterflies announce in flight
 renewal is only fleeting.

Warmed with rays of summer’s fire
Stoked by the heat of your love
Lazy days and sunsets gaze upon
Our soul's desires.

 My heart will go on beating when
Autumn’s colors softly fall
Nature knows the seasons and the reasons why
love stories sometimes end.

Weathering winter’s bitter snow
While safely cradled in your arms
We recite poems aloud
In our cosy chateau.

But if you turn around and walk away
And your love should cease
Then I could not guarantee my love
My heart would last another day.


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(c) Helen M Crutchett (All rights reserved) 2009





© 2020 Helena


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Helena
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An absolutely beautiful piece! Love does have its seaons, and those who weather through the changes will be greatly rewarded for having experienced such a wonder. Your words and descriptions are perfect, such a lovely write.

Thanks to Emma joy for referring this piece.

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( My heart will go on beating when Autumn’s colors softly fall Nature knows the seasons and the reasons why love stories sometimes end.) Wow! This is so beautiful. ~Sharon

Posted 1 Year Ago


The four seasons of love, beautifully penned. Hoping that love is ever spring and summer. Winter love and the fear of loss is too difficult to contemplate. Living without the love of your other half, too tragic by far.

Chris

Posted 1 Year Ago


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Helena

1 Year Ago

Thank you kindly Christine for your review. Love and light ~ Helena ~
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To feel the frost set in
Heralding winter’s bitter snow
While safe and cradled in your arms
We read our poems aloud

beautifully romantic and peaceful. enjoyed reading it.

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Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

An absolutely beautiful piece! Love does have its seaons, and those who weather through the changes will be greatly rewarded for having experienced such a wonder. Your words and descriptions are perfect, such a lovely write.

Thanks to Emma joy for referring this piece.

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

What a beautiful poem of love, through the seasons of a lifetime. So often, couples who have lived and loved a lifetime together, can't bear to live life alone. When one passes on, the other follows within months. Thank you, Helena!

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Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A beautiful poem, written with compassion and I loved the ending. Superb!

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Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The old heart can be broke. I like the story in your poem and the very true ending. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

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Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

So many more should read your words because, once read they stay a while and make one smile. So beautifully threaded, Helena.. love deep, love meant, love in its obvious commitment. ' and ~ Nature knows the seasons and the reasons why' .. .. and yes, it does.. and Nature is what makes the heart tick and tick and ..

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