Might It Be Better?

Might It Be Better?

A Poem by Ella

Might It Be Better?

Might it be better to be alone forever?
As I lie alone tonight 
I think about all the times we held each other
 side by side
Wouldn't it be better to be alone forever?

All these thoughts are running around my head 
and I cant seem to get away.
This uphill battle has left me in shackles 
and I'm sure it would be better
So much better 
to be alone forever 

For the ones I loved have slipped away 
and I'm left to face these inner demons
these sort of feelings I cant seem to escape
The harder I try 
the closer they get.

So I fall and fall into the abyss of 
depression and anxiety and the fear
the fear is overwhelming.

As the darkness starts to suffocate me 
I believe
Yes I believe 
Its so much better to be alone
 forever. 

© 2015 Ella


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Love is a b***h and it causes us great pain as you described in your poem. I think did a great job describing how it affects our psyche with depression and anxiety. Unfortunately, we all need a love and no matter how alone we might want to be our soul eventually will seek that lover. Love this poem. N.

Posted 7 Years Ago


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no,it`s never better to be alone,great write

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Ella

8 Years Ago

Thank you. This is the first poem I've written that's not for school.
 wordman

8 Years Ago

and it`s a top ten,you`re welcome
~This sounds like a familiar tune I sang when I was younger. To be locked away from troubles sounds great but in real life it doesn't work. I wish it did, than we could all avoid stress. Your poem is very much valid though because you express what's inside you in a way I and probably others can relate to.~

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Relic

8 Years Ago

My dear, every state in the country has people that feel this way. You spoke for more than you can i.. read more
Ella

8 Years Ago

Thanks again ill have to keep this in mind this upcoming school year.
Relic

8 Years Ago

You're welcome.

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Tags: might it be better, alone, forever, depression

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Ella

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Hello everyone. If you haven't figured it out yet, my name is Ella. I'm just a girl who enjoys writing and reading every once and a while. Like everyone, what you see on the surface doesn't alwa.. more..

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