Love Lost

Love Lost

A Poem by Ella
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A poem about a boy who lost his chance at love

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A boy so young and so naive, 
didn't know what love could mean.
So when it finally came his way,
He let it go,
And it slipped away.
He tried so hard to get it back,
But learned that tears don't fix holes or cracks. 

© 2018 Ella


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So simple but yet so true and meaningful. Great job!

Posted 1 Year Ago


Ella

1 Year Ago

Thank you! :)
Brava! Short and powerful! Very relatable. Well done!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ella

1 Year Ago

Thank you! :)
Wow! Short and sweet. I definitely can relate to this in my own life. I love how you organized the stanza, as well. It flowed very smoothly. Overall an amazing piece!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ella

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much! I originally had this written on my old phone, which is beyond gone, luckily it p.. read more

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Added on February 21, 2018
Last Updated on September 24, 2018
Tags: Love, poem, sad, love lost, lost love, story, poetry, short

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Ella
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Hello everyone. If you haven't figured it out yet, my name is Ella. I'm just a girl who enjoys writing and reading every once and a while. Like everyone, what you see on the surface doesn't alwa.. more..

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