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Compelling!

Compelling!

A Poem by augustus
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A young man's fantasies!

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She was the one
He saw her from afar
Perfect in every sense
Her body to tease 

She glided when walking
Her breasts full and straining
His penis was big and filling
He stumbled and fell

He knew where she lived
Despite the scraped knees
He followed his desire
Wanting her body

She turned and said
Are you a pervert
Tongue tied I tried
To tell her

I was an admirer
I wanted her naked
I had the need
To ravish her

She smiled and took hold 
My bulging shorts
Wanted to release 
Her hand was firm

Take care young man
With that you can 
Fill my body
In years to come

© 2019 augustus


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This will be wonderful poem at book of Lawrence Durrel or Henry Miller. Your honesty and straight words are very compelling.

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


augustus

3 Weeks Ago

Thank you for your kind words. I do try!
Wonderful piece for mature minds.
Well penned.

Posted 1 Month Ago


augustus

1 Month Ago

Thank you for your review. I do try to titalate!!
That was my teacher.
Though, she never said come back in years to come.
But she did give me the belt, that was just as good.

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Adolescent fantasising over an older and beautiful woman. Many is the adolescent male who has done that. Your poem is well crafted augustus and your chosen title most apt. Compulsion it is.

Chris

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

augustus

2 Months Ago

Thank you for your review Chris. That was me many years ago!
Christine Anne Shaw

2 Months Ago

We often write about our own experiences, so I am not in the least surprised :)
augustus

2 Months Ago

I'm not ashamed of my past desires. I always did prefer older women and to be having descreet sex wi.. read more

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Added on June 13, 2019
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augustus
augustus

Winchester, Hampshire, United Kingdom



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I am now an old man of 82 but inside my tanned body I'm a mere 21 years of age. I like writing Erotica and if it offends then I would suggest you take up Scrabble or something equally taxing. Meanwhil.. more..

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