Random thoughts

Random thoughts

A Poem by augustus

I hold you in arms
Never to let you go
Can this be love 
I am not sure 

Your skin is like silk
The eyes are so clear
We don't speak 
Your legs are so long

I stroke your breasts
They are so full
The tips are hard
To suck them is divine

Can we be lovers
It's hard to tell
I want to have you
Will you want me


What do you want to do ?
New mail

© 2019 augustus


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All the thoughts that pass through your mind as you are becoming intimate with someone new - is it real? Will it last? Will it even progress at all? Taking in all the details of the other person whilst trying to collect your own thoughts and opinions. I liked this, the random notion comes through with how dis-jointed the first two verses are. I can sense you taking it all in.

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

augustus

10 Months Ago

Thank you for your review. I'm not very good with poetry and prefer to write stories. Ta muchly!
LouBelle

10 Months Ago

My pleasure :)



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and he may be thinking...more than just flesh...can we be lovers in mind, heart and spirit as well.....

j.

Posted 10 Months Ago


All the thoughts that pass through your mind as you are becoming intimate with someone new - is it real? Will it last? Will it even progress at all? Taking in all the details of the other person whilst trying to collect your own thoughts and opinions. I liked this, the random notion comes through with how dis-jointed the first two verses are. I can sense you taking it all in.

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

augustus

10 Months Ago

Thank you for your review. I'm not very good with poetry and prefer to write stories. Ta muchly!
LouBelle

10 Months Ago

My pleasure :)

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augustus
augustus

Southampton, Hampshire, United Kingdom



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OK So I write stuff that might be construed as nothing more than pornographic. You, the reader will make your own minds up! I'm never satisfied with my writing and I will always welcome your opinions!.. more..

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