Random thoughts

Random thoughts

A Poem by augustus

I hold you in arms
Never to let you go
Can this be love 
I am not sure 

Your skin is like silk
The eyes are so clear
We don't speak 
Your legs are so long

I stroke your breasts
They are so full
The tips are hard
To suck them is divine

Can we be lovers
It's hard to tell
I want to have you
Will you want me

© 2019 augustus


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All the thoughts that pass through your mind as you are becoming intimate with someone new - is it real? Will it last? Will it even progress at all? Taking in all the details of the other person whilst trying to collect your own thoughts and opinions. I liked this, the random notion comes through with how dis-jointed the first two verses are. I can sense you taking it all in.

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

augustus

3 Weeks Ago

Thank you for your review. I'm not very good with poetry and prefer to write stories. Ta muchly!
LauraKate

3 Weeks Ago

My pleasure :)


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and he may be thinking...more than just flesh...can we be lovers in mind, heart and spirit as well.....

j.

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


All the thoughts that pass through your mind as you are becoming intimate with someone new - is it real? Will it last? Will it even progress at all? Taking in all the details of the other person whilst trying to collect your own thoughts and opinions. I liked this, the random notion comes through with how dis-jointed the first two verses are. I can sense you taking it all in.

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

augustus

3 Weeks Ago

Thank you for your review. I'm not very good with poetry and prefer to write stories. Ta muchly!
LauraKate

3 Weeks Ago

My pleasure :)

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augustus
augustus

Winchester, Hampshire, United Kingdom



About
I am now an old man of 82 but inside my tanned body I'm a mere 21 years of age. I like writing Erotica and if it offends then I would suggest you take up Scrabble or something equally taxing. Meanwhil.. more..

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