Morning's Best

First kiss of morning:

Blinds drawn,

                    doors closed,

Coffee machine,

                        waits.

Night clothes,

                     scattered.

 

 

Skin,

       red quilt warm.

Lips soft,

              slightly swollen.

Tan lines sharp,

                       coconut scent .

Blue eyes blink slowly,

                                   ocean shallows,

                                                           r i p p l e (less).

Lone blonde curl,

                           misplaced.

 

Whispered smile,

                           flavors sweet,

         breath.

First kiss of morning.

Reviews

[emmajoy]

Wonderful, passionate, subtle, memorable. Love the touch of the words, the format's near edible and the pic's serpentine movement is extraordinary.
'Whispered smile, ~ flavors sweet, ~ breath. ~ First kiss of morning.'

[LouisianaBird]

This is very clever and very cute.
Love it.