One rose still standing

I don't know ifthis is crap or okay, so pls give an honest opinion :) It's about finding a spring of hope when all is lost, or just finding a rose where all these dead ones are

A sweet delicate rose

Towers closer into view

The sweet honey fragrance of warmth and dew

Enrichens my head to toes

 

The vibrations of floral glare

Dampen me with passion

It’s buzzed an excitement as I clash on

Soft buckets of dirt light and fair

 

Shun out of this woeful world

Lies the poor tethered soldiers

Who fought the blazing suns armours

Fumed out black and rivetly curled

 

As this blanket of crystal dark sorrow

Suffocates the mind from light              

An overlooked seed, miniscule from sight

Ribbons viscously, past mindless foes

 

 

Into this sweet delicate rose

Overtaken perished dim fragments

Of deceased petals cull abandonments

That scatter terrains, as the gust promptly blows

Author's Note

notice the made-up word?
Do the paragraphs fit??